M (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} mdm_sosostris) wrote in johnbowker, |
I re-read the story today, since I just got my copy in the mail. It's not your plot; I think the reviewer just got confused. But the review's spot on: it does pack a wallop of oomph in short shrift. Now if you'd just finish it--and by "it" I mean the book this story is clearly meant to be--you'll be all set.
(I still remember my frantic, futile jabs at the PgDn button once I reached the last page. Bastard.)
(I still remember my frantic, futile jabs at the PgDn button once I reached the last page. Bastard.)
